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While the text has been changed I was actually really happy with the art from the original page 4. Not enough to keep the art, obviously, but enough to basically redraw the page with some minor changes. The biggest two changes to the art were showing the first scene with Zel and Adrik be post slap and changing Irving’s expression/posture. In the original page I meant for Irving to be holding his side because he was injured but as I got more use to the characters I realized that Irving would never be involved in anything close to a fair fight. Also the first page was a lot more ambiguous as to how Zel died and in this one it is a lot more clear as to what the page is implying. The middle panel will be expanded upon really soon with the regular updates. The first panel will be further explained much farther into the future.

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